First of all, thanks for the quick reply
Second thing is, I hadn't seen anyone use that moving knight scare until about an hour ago while I was watching a video and since then I've changed it slightly :p. I believe what you said about 'forcing the player to do too much' is right. It did feel a bit repetitive and controlling so I've tweaked a few parts of the script. However I am going to keep in the grunt part where you become inactive.
As for lighting... yea I do take a lot of time making sure everything looks nice. It's somewhat of an OCD for good looking graphics
The lack of sound is mostly down to my coding knowledge because I do think it sounds a bit quiet at points.
Overall I will keep in mind the points you've made and will continue to progress my storyline further. Thanks for the advise