(07-20-2012, 06:14 PM)neocrawler Wrote: Hello,
I was kinda looking for a female voice actor. Just for a couple of sentence and maybe later in the map aswell,
but that I don't know yet. U can post beneath this thread or private message me. I ain't be online on this forum on the next sunday and monday 22-23 july 2012. So if you would comment me on these dates. And I don't response. It's not that I ignore. I will response as fast as I can. Ofcourse I will put you down in the credits . And if I would need you again. Is it possible to take u as female voice actor again?.
The sentences that are going to be said in my intro are:
Female voice: Felix, did you have another nightmare?
Felix: Yes, I did.
Female voice: It was just a bad dream, Felix, nothing to worry about.
Felix: I know, but it seemed so real.
Female voice: You need some rest, Felix. You've worked too hard over these past few days.
Felix: Yes... that's probably the reason for these nightmares.
Female voice: Just... go back to sleep. You need it, honey.
Felix: Yes, I will, darling.
I'm no female voice actor, but I think you need to proof read your grammar here. Obviously English is not your first language, however, your CS is in English, and if you want it to keep all it's scare-factor and atmosphere you should run your text by someone who has a better grasp of grammar. I'll tidy up that speech and stick it in bold for you.
I changed some punctuation aswell, trying to make it how you seemed to want it to sound. Spelling, obviously, isn't so much of a problem, unless you want to use subtitles for the speech.