(07-31-2012, 10:01 PM)The Shanus Wrote: I think with this one, you need a little breaking of the voice. The emotion is there, but it doesn't break through. Like if someone is feeling deep emotion, their voice wavers, rather than keeping the same tone, if you understand what I mean. He seemed too calm about offering his flesh. A bit more screaming as if he is ecstatic about the thought of it would do it, I think 
Thanks for the feedback!
I live in an apartment, and every once in a while I think, I'm going to really scream on this one. Then I wonder if the cops might come knocking on the door. I can't wait to have my own house, for many reasons. But being able to scream bloody murder is a big one.