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[liamwylie]

Story was fairly average (again no offence) and you often had redundant words, such as "PAIN relief for the burns" When you could just have "relief for the burns" which imo, sounds a lot better, if you want, I'll PM you a good review of it, and not having a space between every line (use paragraphs still) would help me read it, but I'm not sure whether that was your fault.







Anyway, you're at least a lot better than the usual ones, and I hope you continue to get better.

Thanks, yeah, I had taken it off of Microsoft Word so it had place it with spaces inbetween every line.