(09-03-2012, 06:48 PM)Kreekakon Wrote: Hey, props to you ElectricRed, and your helpers! That looks, and sounds great. The sounds were quite creepy in my opinion.
All small "logic typo" though in my opinion though:
The memento he got said the "Lock was weak, and some acid should be able to melt through." I think this doesn't make full sense because he has no idea that there is usable acid somewhere to melt through the lock with. What he should say is: "The lock looks weak, I might be able to find some way to break it." This sounds much more logical.
^Purely assumption of course. If your story has demands otherwise feel feel to correct me ![Smile Smile](https://www.frictionalgames.com/forum/images/smilies/smile.gif)
Haha, I knew someone would point that out! It's something I'm definitely going to change, and simply forgot to do so before recording the clip. Thanks!