Ender

[candlejack131]

The time is approaching gentlemen. I am coming up to what i want to make my "final" level so how do you guys think i should cut the strings on this Custom story how could i end it with a bang "originally" and creatively. So i would like some ideas here but in order for anyone to think of a proper ending they should read up on its actual story. SO i will provide the entire story in a spoiler tab that i suggest you do not open unless you want to spoil the surprises.

Spoiler below!

LORE: Alexander lovat accused convict and supposed killer of his only wife and child is thrown into prison by the baron of EndersBurg Lord Reddrick Redwood. Alex originally took shelter in the Barons own estate claiming his family was indanger. Alexand then reveals in a series of diary entries that his son had entered the forbidden forest in Endersburg called "Black woods" where Der Grobmann is rumored to roam. This brought Der Grobmann after the child and the family persisting in the way where then marked for not giving up the boy. About 3-4 days in the Barons estate Redwood claims that Alexanders son "Anderson Andrew Lovat" (Andrew is the childs middle name) is missing and immediately blames Alex for the crimes. Alex is forced in to prison where he becomes certain his wife is not safe in the hands of Redwood and he is not safe from Der Grobmann in the prison. He then decides to Embark on the journey to kill Redwood and find both his wife and child. PLOT POINTS: (This is where the MAJOR spoilers kick in) 1.Alexander knew his son entered the woods and even encouraged the child to do so to prove to his wife that Der Grobmann was but a myth 2. Redwood has spoken to Der Grobmann and handed the child over to Der Grobmann himself. 3. Even after the child was given up Der Grobmann did not leave and continued to stalk Redwood Alexander and a side character known as "Kyle Clemming". 3. Kyle clemming is more of a plot device or "tool" if you will, he took notes on the what has been happening around you giving you input from other peoples eyes. 4. Kyle clemming is eventually found "dead" in the 2nd to last level. 5. Remember this is a test run or a "beta" if you will the games only 10-12 levels long and has been in development for at least 3-4 months.

so how do i end all of this what do you guys think what loose ends can i tie together that haven't been stitched up already?

Uhm, I really think you shouldn't Ask for that here. It's your story - you should come up with an ending yourself. Just my opinion.

I am "NOT" asking for you to write me one i am talking about "suggestions" what i mean is what would make it better to you. What do you hate in an ending. What do you love. What would you find original. That kind of thing. I know its my story and i am writing it now I'm just waiting for input from "you" the audience.

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You completely misunderstood my intentions