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RE: Ender

I think you have a </Category> of more. At the final, there are two. If the credits where the last thing you did, there the issue should be.

I've also notices some minor errors, like "COme and stay with us". Check the .lang file so that kind of things appear. It's very unlikely to see in CS's that in the notes are some errors that break the atmosphere.

Anyway, you story seems promising. Keep it! Big Grin

THE OTHERWORLD (WIP)

Aculy iz dolan.

10-29-2012, 09:22 PM

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Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-11-2012, 11:35 PM

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RE: Ender - by Robby - 09-12-2012, 03:19 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-12-2012, 08:21 PM

RE: Ender - by Robby - 09-12-2012, 08:24 PM

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RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-13-2012, 09:48 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-13-2012, 11:43 PM

RE: Ender - by Zaffre - 09-14-2012, 01:07 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-14-2012, 01:10 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-14-2012, 09:11 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-15-2012, 02:57 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-17-2012, 08:43 PM

RE: Ender - by Statyk - 09-25-2012, 04:14 AM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 09-25-2012, 06:35 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-25-2012, 08:01 PM

RE: Ender - by Robby - 09-25-2012, 08:34 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-25-2012, 09:04 PM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 09-26-2012, 02:08 PM

RE: Ender - by Robby - 09-26-2012, 02:21 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-26-2012, 08:46 PM

RE: Ender - by KH55 - 09-26-2012, 09:28 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-26-2012, 09:29 PM

RE: Ender - by KH55 - 09-26-2012, 09:33 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-26-2012, 09:34 PM

RE: Ender - by KH55 - 09-26-2012, 09:36 PM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 09-26-2012, 03:02 PM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 09-27-2012, 06:45 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-27-2012, 08:20 PM

RE: Ender - by xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx - 09-28-2012, 01:42 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 09-30-2012, 04:50 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-05-2012, 12:25 AM

RE: Ender - by KH55 - 10-05-2012, 12:44 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-05-2012, 01:10 AM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 10-05-2012, 06:45 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-05-2012, 08:05 PM

RE: Ender - by xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx - 10-05-2012, 10:59 AM

RE: Ender - by kartanonperuna - 10-05-2012, 06:38 PM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 10-05-2012, 08:26 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-05-2012, 09:06 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-06-2012, 05:21 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-07-2012, 12:36 AM

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RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-07-2012, 05:36 PM

RE: Ender - by warmacha11 - 10-07-2012, 08:44 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-07-2012, 08:54 PM

RE: Ender - by warmacha11 - 10-07-2012, 08:58 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-07-2012, 09:27 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-09-2012, 09:12 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-14-2012, 07:43 PM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 10-14-2012, 08:28 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-15-2012, 12:35 AM

RE: Ender - by Statyk - 10-15-2012, 01:16 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-15-2012, 08:53 PM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 10-15-2012, 09:01 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-15-2012, 09:12 PM

RE: Ender - by Adny - 10-16-2012, 12:36 AM

RE: Ender - by crisosphinx - 10-16-2012, 12:32 AM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 10-16-2012, 06:37 AM

RE: Ender - by crisosphinx - 10-16-2012, 02:24 PM

RE: Ender - by Acies - 10-16-2012, 12:38 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-16-2012, 12:54 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-21-2012, 03:13 PM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 10-21-2012, 03:43 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-21-2012, 05:08 PM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 10-25-2012, 02:17 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-26-2012, 12:27 AM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 10-26-2012, 06:34 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-28-2012, 07:46 PM

RE: Ender - by kartanonperuna - 10-29-2012, 06:15 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-29-2012, 02:09 PM

RE: Ender - by kartanonperuna - 10-29-2012, 02:43 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-29-2012, 04:27 PM

RE: Ender - by WALP - 10-29-2012, 05:23 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-29-2012, 06:25 PM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 10-29-2012, 09:22 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-29-2012, 09:59 PM

RE: Ender - by Your Computer - 10-29-2012, 10:11 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 10-29-2012, 10:21 PM

RE: Ender - by The chaser - 10-29-2012, 10:29 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 11-01-2012, 02:53 AM

RE: Ender - by Statyk - 11-01-2012, 02:57 AM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 11-01-2012, 07:54 PM

RE: Ender - by candlejack131 - 11-16-2012, 10:30 PM

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