Digressiophobia - What about Mark? - Chapter 2

[Streetboat]

I figured out the stone hammer part- I hadn't noticed a book that allowed me to switch back to the other character. I ended up finishing it:

Spoiler below!

Overall, that was a very pleasant experience, and it had a compelling issue with a genuinely interesting and well-thought-out gimmick (character switching to solve puzzles). The mapping was excellent, and noticeably improved in the second chapter, as well as scripting. The pacing was great, with puzzle solving and monster fleeing having just the right amount of space in between. My only gripe would have to be the campy feeling the dialogue has- while impressive that you did so much (especially that conversation you have with the old man), the actual dialogue itself felt really forced and unrealistic, pulling me back out of the otherwise immersive experience. If you could have the scripts go through another draft before recording lines next time, as well as put yourself in the boots of the characters, then I think that would greatly improve your next project. As it is, though, this is one of my top 10 Amnesia custom stories (made even better by the fact that you didn't make it a full conversion!).