[WIP] Quiet Slumber - (The Tall Man/Slender Man Story)

[GlitchScatter]

I'm looking to make something a bit different and new-ish, granted it is Amnesia and there is only so much you can do, I'm just hoping it comes out as good as I imagine it to be.

I've played a lot of custom stories, and keep finding this mess of either bad stories and good scripting or bad scripting with good stories, hell, even the same story over and over again. Its sorta boring ya'know?

I'm looking for immersion with the story, and actual scares.. more psychological than just your run of the mill jumpscare. I want to freak people out.. or at least give them an unsettled feeling. :c Its hard to come by any of these.. in any game anymore..

Rambling and ranting aside, I'm currently working on such a story (well, trying to at least). This story will be based on a certain creepypasta.. rather, the "actual" legends if you want to call it that.
I've had this strange fascination with Slender Man recently, and I feel that there could be one hell of a good story made that is based on him.

If you have any tips, suggestions or just general ideas of what I could incorporate into the story then by all means please let me know!
I'm also looking for a good slendy model to throw in here as well, but if I can't find one I'll just have to make my own.

Any help would be more than appreciated, music, models, even voice acting if you feel generous.

[I'll keep this updated and post pictures as I go, right now I'm just in the planning stage with tidbits of level designing]

Updates

First floor is nearly complete, just a little bit of decoration and some scripts and I'll show my first screen shots of it hopefully. :D

Here is a picture of the Library, the area I'm thinking I'll start the character off in. So far I haven't gotten much done in the way of scripting, more worried about the aesthetic of the place for now.



Any comments on the looks so far would be great!
Criticism is also more than welcome. c: