Idea for CS

[jiersk]

Hello there, I'm currently working on a custom story, but I wonder if the story is good enough, here it is:

You, the character ( I still need to make up a name ) wake up in a prison. You think you know why you are there, for the crimes you have commited, killing three people from your village. But there is a different reason why you are there, and why all the other people are there. People have been taken away for "inspectations" and never returned. You need to escape to the nearby village to get help.

I'll try to not make it cliché, so the "inspectations" aren't just tortures, but they'll have a story behind them.

Ps. Is the name "Captive" already taken?