I just finished this. Overall it was pretty good..
My short review:
Spoiler below!
There are some nice scares at start, but someones are expected later on.
What I really liked and what you've used:
- Events when you get lost and rooms are little downhill
- Climbing parts, surprising scares
- Disappearing doors and that "Angel event"
- Music
- Few unique scares
What I didn't like:
- Too short
- Lightning
- Not so good mapping, atmosphere pretty dull
- Story lacks in some parts
Overall: Don't get me wrong I enjoyed it and damn I screamed when that last scare appears unexpected scare for sure
Verdict: 7 / 10 Some really well maded scares and enjoyable epic trip to the full of surprises and confusions
You really have potential! Make now new one and longer