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Request Looking for a talented writer.
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RE: Looking for a talented writer.

(03-26-2013, 12:11 AM)i3670 Wrote: "In 1452, a family lives in a harmony. A father, wife and a son. Until the wife was hit by a car. The family was devastated with the loss of the wife. The Father, however, loved so much that he attempted to resurrect her using sacrifices. Will the son find out?"

I'd like to see something different from what the first person wrote.
Also, some critique:
1. The timeline is set in the late victorian era, which ranges from mid 1800 - to early 1900.
2. No cars in 1452
3. "loved HER so much" (Same as first person's reply)

Its hard to see the truth when you've been blinded by lies.
(This post was last modified: 03-26-2013, 04:18 AM by eagledude4.)
03-26-2013, 04:08 AM
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Looking for a talented writer. - by eagledude4 - 03-25-2013, 06:55 AM
RE: Looking for a talented writer. - by zaggnut - 03-25-2013, 09:06 PM
RE: Looking for a talented writer. - by i3670 - 03-26-2013, 12:11 AM
RE: Looking for a talented writer. - by eagledude4 - 03-26-2013, 04:08 AM
RE: Looking for a talented writer. - by Kman - 03-26-2013, 01:03 AM
RE: Looking for a talented writer. - by i3670 - 03-26-2013, 09:39 AM
RE: Looking for a talented writer. - by zaggnut - 03-26-2013, 08:01 PM



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