[WIP] Frozen Spirits IFC

[7heDubz]

idea on to the Plotline.

Spoiler below!

Looking for adventure hooks here! take a look at the spoiler if you have any good idea's and please keep highly generic and cliche's that wouldnt fit into the storyline to yourself thanks!



As Xavier explores the castle mainly trying to get the gas and electricity back on so as not to freeze.
The below is a spoiler that also has a request for help inside of it. Please read only if you would like to help with the creation and dont mind a little spoiler. this poiler doesnt ruin alot of the story but it still ruins some of the surprise.
[spoiler] However during this he hears whispers about, and then see's a ghost (IF i can get a model for it if not he just hears the ghost speak to him), the ghost then talks to him and tells him a cryptic tale about how the castle holds a dark and chilling secret. Something to do with murder and tyrants being taken from power by means of force.

Looking for a bit of help here, i want this part to be sort of poetic whilst still being cryptic... Im not to good at poetry im sure i could end up comming up with something but, I'd still like something better then what i can come up with!
It should give the character a reason of exploring the castle im not yet sure of this adventure hook yet however.

EDIT - Editing the last part adventure hook has been found and somone for the whole cryptic speaking thing has been found.

As Xavier (now referred to as the player) explores the castle mainly trying to get the gas and electricity back on so as not to freeze.
He finds pages to a book which tell a chilling yet grabbing story, and as he explores the castle to find more pages to the book explaining more and more about the TRUE history of the castle. And in the depths of the basement lies the final answer, the final solution, the final page to the books terrible story.