The writing, oh the writing ........

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Dan has done a really tremendous job with the dialogue and the notes. Really outstanding.

Agree.
Shame the plot was horrible, characters were flat and generic and there was no character development to speak of.

The way the story is presented is so at odds with itself its crazy.
At one hand you have this boring and predictable story of his kids and those pigs, and on the other hand you have a more interesting backstory.

A real shame all exposition is done through those notes instead of recordings, its slows down the game play unnecessarily and made me start skipping the notes just to get it on with the story at hand.

It started to piss me off eventually since i liked how they were written, but i just couldnt care enough about stuff you could predict a hour in advance. Also the redundant foreshadowing of him killing his kids was really pointless.
Yeah we get it, we got it 1h in, stop explaining the same thing 10x in different ways.