Is A Machine For Pigs best suited to a 'mature' audience?

[Mjarr]

I think before you head off on a 'purple prose' trip, you should consider this. The visuals and sound FX in the game aimed to create something like a sense of an authentic Victorian world (at least in the non-fantastical areas, not suggesting clockwork nuclear reactors are actually authentically Victorian of course) - so why not the language as well. Maybe go read some Victorian novels, or newspapers and then see whether it's really so different. And ask why it might be important to try and capture the feel of the language or if not, why a sense of an authentic world is paramount to visuals so should be avoided in the text...

Reality is unrealistic combined with plenty of dissonance with cultural values or plain ignorance. Especially those few lines which might be more appropriate to be found in Victorian (or even Edwardian) era porn novel.