Someone watch my amnesia commentarys for criticism?

[Robby]

Watched some of your stuff, and as Rom said, there are some slight issues here and there. Main thing is the facecam. I'm sure you already know. And the next would be the accent. Strange, and a little bit difficult to understand, but a little "rethinking" should make it easier to decode what you said. Anything else, I don't really see anything else that might need criticism. At least not yet. Being an LPer myself, I'm used to different accents, but yours is a golden cake lol.