Amnesia A Late Time In The Night

[MsHannerBananer]

Short explain of beggining of the game:

You wake in your house and you go into a small house.But when u enter it,something bad happens.

I think you should rethink your... story line. There's nothing particularly interesting about waking up in a house and something bad happening. That's basically every horror story ever written. You wake up and something bad happens.


Based on initial assessment you STILL need to work on mapping. Room needs to be smaller, stop turning up the gamma and utilize light boxes, spot lights and point lights, ceiling looks too low and cuts off the rest of the walls, the shelf needs books/decor, and you need to personalize the room. There's nothing really interesting in the menu, nothing eye catching, nothing unique. If you want people to be interested in this, you need to sit down and spend hours working on it.

Custom stories don't just happen in 5 minutes.

I can only suggest finding someone to help you map. You say you've improved, but I'm sorry to say that I don't see any improvement at all.