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Work in progress Amnesia: Voices in my head.
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RE: Amnesia: Voices in my head.

Corrected your top passage; changed some spelling errors and some English rules. I also changed a bit of the wording to suit tenses (past/present) and to avoid repetitive words.

I honestly don't remember a thing from that day... The day my wife was killed. To be honest I don't even remember her. The voice in my head tells me a lot about her, but still I can't recall a single thing about her. Did I really kill her? Why would I murder my own wife? Maybe the voice is wrong about this, but he seems friendly. He helped me to get this far. He talks about another voice as well, but I cannot hear that one. Maybe it's not there. Will that voice come back? Is it the voice of a man or a woman? Is it the voice of my wife? I am more scared of the things lurking around in the shadows. I hope that the voice will get me out safely.

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03-18-2014, 01:51 PM
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Amnesia: Voices in my head. - by Skyy - 03-18-2014, 12:27 PM
RE: Amnesia: Voices in my head. - by Romulator - 03-18-2014, 01:51 PM
RE: Amnesia: Voices in my head. - by AGP - 03-19-2014, 01:23 AM



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