Amnesia story award

[VaeVictis]

Interesting, I thought the game outstayed its welcome. Mainly due to its lack of gameplay and drawn out walk paths from storybit (note) to storybit (another note).

It's been awhile since I played it last, so I'd have to go back to get better insight, but I think I understand what you mean. Like at the end when

Spoiler below!

you were ascending the pyramid structure long after the machine's speech ended?

If that's what you mean, I can see where you're coming from. Tension can out stay its welcome.
The space between the notes didn't really bother me, as I recall.

AMFP wasn't an interactive novel. Because it wasn't interactive. It was a walking simulator with the story being read out loud to you in the background. Not the same thing.

I guess. I played it with 'Dear Esther' in mind so that's how it came across to me. I won't deny that it was linear, but I still liked it.
(Also, welcome back).