[WIP] Alone in the Dark - Custom Story

[AGP]

While I find your screenshots to be interesting, you might want to add some that show more of the actual design, to give us the idea of your visual concept for your game. These seem a little plain and vague, albeit a tad generic.

I'll download this and give it run-through, and report back with anything I find.

And as Beartrix has already offered, should you need a voice, we're both on that like crazy. ;D