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Work in progress Alone in the Dark - Custom Story
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RE: Alone in the Dark - Custom Story

Well, I only have a short list of feedback:

- grammar/spelling nitpicks: In the description for your custom story, change "awaken" to "awoken". This was probably just a typo.
- In the note, use "someone who cares", instead of "that". This is minor, so you can feel free to take it or leave it.
- Don't forget to use your corner welders for those walls; they will get rid of that awkwardness where the two walls meet to form a corner
- Lastly, the lighting seems a bit strange. I can't really tell you how to fix it, hell, I've been working with the editor for a while and still can't get the right lighting! That'll be something you really just need to play around with a lot, or maybe research further into.

(This post was last modified: 10-02-2014, 07:14 AM by AGP.)
10-02-2014, 07:13 AM
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Alone in the Dark - Custom Story - by Valid Games - 10-02-2014, 04:18 AM
RE: Alone in the Dark - Custom Story - by AGP - 10-02-2014, 06:21 AM
RE: Alone in the Dark - Custom Story - by AGP - 10-02-2014, 07:13 AM
RE: Alone in the Dark - Custom Story - by Daemian - 10-03-2014, 02:45 AM



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