My SOMA Custom Story Idea

[Koopa Rs07]

"The whole company is mostly of hired former UFO investigators"

lol that's a lot of retards

"The gameplay starts with you waking up in your living quarter in the morning. You first take a shower and get dressed. As you leave your room it looks like you've been asleep for years. You start searching for your crew to find no one around.."

no one's done that before, especially not machine for pigs or anything. asleep for years... hmm cryogenic chambers?

Yeah I took those parts out. Keep telling me what sounds cheesy or too much like Penumbra or Amnesia. Best and try to chisel out this story to make it sound the best.. And maybe even tell me what I should add. I don't have to be the only one creating the story you know. (And I realize how late this reply is..)