Subterranea (Work in Progress - NEED FEEDBACK)

[Silverwave]

I'd also like to add something to the last two comments.

I'm a book editor and one thing you have to teach to the authors is everytime someone (anyone) think something isn't clear, out of place or somehow bad, it probably is. The author doesn't have an exterior look of his work and something he thought was ok could be a flaw for the others.

So, when someone tells you he thinks that knowing the character being a spelunker seems irrevelant/out of place or feels somehow wrong, you should at least take that into consideration and ask yourself if you think that info is necessary or if you can't think of something better. After carefull thinking, if you still believe it's relevant and good, then keep it, it's your work after all!

Like Mekose said, "never deny feedback".

Keep the good work!