Unnamed Story - [WIP]

[Gamemakingdude]

I guess i should edit this...

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EDIT: You've edited your main post, no need for me to give away spoilers now ^^

Looking forward to more pics. You should add some more detail to your scenes, but that top one looks quite ok already. The chandeliers are weirdly placed though.
Maybe a tip: Think of the purposes of the rooms first. I'm not sure what this is, it looks somewhat like a dining room, combined with some others. :p

Thanks for suggestions sure will add more detail and i'll see if i can fix the chandelier.