Awakening to the unknown

[Kyle]

It was O.K. but seriously, there were a lot of problems.

Level 1

I found this level to be very weird. First, you need to make the monster to pop up when a player intersects with an area a little ways toward it. Second, the monster needs to have points at where it moves to. Third, the monster needs to disapear once it reaches the end of its points which is away from the player. Fourth, the doorways for the castle part of the level were messed up. Fifth, near the end of the level, the lever on the wall that can be moved left and right had no purpose. Sixth, the sounds for the map were all overlapping and was very irratating. This level was not scary for me, and I am a not-so-brave of a person.

Level 2

The dungeon did not fit too well with the first level. Once again, like I said about the first level, the monster wasn't that cool. I am not sure if the monster this time did move around in this level. There was a random hint that would pop up where it said that the door was locked and the key is somewhere around there. And the thing is that the door was not locked and it popped up after I walked through it. There was also another problem about the hints. The other hint that would pop up would be about there being water and that something is in it.

Level 3

This level not so good. There were problems with doors being locked and the puzzle with the chemistry pot was completely taken from the game. Except I did noticed that it had two puzzles mixed together. There were not a lot of clutter anywhere. Some areas looked exactly like the same as the other rooms. The thalers that were in your game were completely useless. The little room that you started in was kind of stupid. Having the altar ontop of the pedastal was not a good combination. There was also one part when you enter some room and the door locks. It took away sanity when I wasn't even looking. So I recommend you get the player to look at where the scary things are happening for it to make sense.

I hope that you work apon your mistakes and make your game a lot better before starting new levels.