Gathering a team of modders for a BIG mod

[Endrek03]

Anyway, Im pretty sure In thos times, If you murdered and tortured so many people and children, Its off to the rope.. so what if your crazy and in need of professional help? im not sure they really cared to help the mentally ill back then. And Im really not sure what your thinking of when you mention police arresting him.

You can't begin to imagine how much I was thinking this when I was first reading this post.
This is taking place in, what . . . 1890 Russia? I don't think the "police" care much about trials and what not there.

Of course, we could take all that (honestly) useless background and throw it away, simply starting with "Daniel" (Quotation for emphasis. . . I also agree with Alex, no need to use Frictional games characters.) in the asylum.
. . . which. . . just means now you have an unknown character with an unknown background in an unknown location, or as I like to call it:
Square 1.
Allow me to introduce you to your theme song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LXp3AMgbG6k

I don't mean to put your story down, nor does anyone here I imagine. It simply comes off as desperate need of refinement. Find out what your story is about and work in the character from there. As evident here, I can only imagine if you came out with this and announced it's about Daniel, more than 3/4ths of the community would be turned off by it.

Also . . .

More of the story will be reviled to moders only.

Moders will be reviled thoroughly. XD This made me laugh.