Could need some help with my custom story

[sassix]

Well, now, we have no info whatsoever on your map making skills, story, what not...
So it's best to show a bit what you've made and all so we can see what you can do

hm y well im rly new to this,its no prob for me making maps but im getting out of models and textures so everything will repeat anytime thats one reason to need some help. And im going to make a vid now anyway to show one szene in ma game and ill move around there to show u my map.