(02-17-2011, 02:27 PM)Cryaotic Wrote: I just want to say theDARKW0LF, this was awesome.
VERY impressive for a first map! I hope to see some more from you, you have some great potential.
I recorded a commentated playthrough of the game here if you are interested in seeing how a normal player reacts in live time: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K6lEKz0Hi...t_received
Again, excellent and imaginative. Good on you, guy.
Haha, thanks for posting your playthrough! I really enjoyed watching it, good humor and everything. There most definitely is "more to come", I've just been temporarily side-tracked by some college studies. As for plot, I did create a very quick little introduction deal in the form of two (or maybe it was three?) notes that sort of explain why the heck you're there and what exactly you're doing in such a not-nice place, but they're kind of fail?
So yeah, dont know where any sort of plot is going with this, but maybe you could make it up as you go, you seem pretty good at it, haha. Oh and by the way, you
just missed the lantern, you needed to look closer and from a better angle inside the swinging desk door in the room where you get your first key and you'll find the lantern in the corner
.
In my latest version I refined the map's layout a great deal and changed the way some events occur (omitting some and adding others) and I lengthened the map a pretty good deal, probably by like 10 minutes at most, if you're a person who likes to search every nook and cranny for items of interest...
I'll let you know when my new version is about finished, not final though, I still haven't figured how to end it for good, so it'll likely be more of a cliff-hanger deal.