UNTITLED (New Custom Story) W.I.P.

[Samuelblitz]

Hello everyone, i'm kind of new to this forum but i decided i would create a thread about my FIRST custom story that i have been working on.

UNTITLED


Description: The entire story will contain around three maps (maybe more). I'd really like to make this map as scary as possible but seeing as this is my first map, i will definitely have some room for improvement. Which is why I ABSOLUTELY NEED CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.

Story: Nothing official YET...

Screenshots:




(The rest of the images at: http://s483.photobucket.com/albums/rr192...?start=all )

Demo: To be released soon..

Development:

Map #1:
Level Design: 80%
Scripting: 50%
Notes/Mementos: 5%

Map #2:
Level Design: 50%
Scripting: 10%
Notes/Mementos: 0%

Map #3:
Not yet started.


Also, i hope it is okay if i ask some questions in this thread? I am still just learning some basics about custom story creating so there are a few things i am still wondering about..