Super Alpha! in other words not even a demo :P

[Doctorcheese]

I played through it. It was quite enjoyable but there were a few minor changes that i would like to see.

First let me start with pros and cons.

Pros: Good atmosphere, nice scares, nice story.

Cons: The big scares come way too early (like the monster for an example), needs more variety! Like all those boxes in the, what i assumed was, a storage? Also you should add more details.
Last but not least, the light billboards coming out of the windows need to look more natural. They look so flat against the window! Also check the spelling in the notes.

Overall experience was good though, fix those details and it will be a blast!

Its better than most alphas though!