Experi-mental; my first story/map

[Droopy]

Very big, you've certainly got a lot done.
I really liked exploring the levels, especially when I got to the library area.

Excellent level design, I'm excited to see how you are going to implement more game play mechanics

The only things I noticed were minor glitches with walls and (the tiniest amount) of awkward placement of some unmovable objects, although I feel bad pointing these out because I'm certain you are already planning on smoothing things out and chances are you already noticed them.

I am very surprised at how well done this is though, especially for someone who has started hpl editor and scripting in less than a week!

Looking forward to seeing your progress on this promising project