Experi-mental; my first story/map

[Jakeorch]

Thank you for the comments!

Yea I know there's a few structural problems, such as misaligned walls. I guess I got in a hurry on some parts. As you can tell, I spent the bulk of my time on the library. Everything is still a work in progress, and I will iron out all of the minor details, such as spelling grammar etc..


Streetboat, I see what you mean by the house not making sense (a dungeon that goes underground on the second floor? I'm glad you pointed that out. Same with some window placements) I will probably move the library to the first floor.

How many changes do you guys think I should make before re-uploading the story?


Thanks again!