Black Forest Castle V2.1 (micro update!)

[iNs]

Hey there theDARKW0LF.

I want to say 'thank you' for that amazing and awesome work of a genius!

Iam very happy that your User Story was the first User Story i have played,
because it was a really great story with scary moments, good logic with all
rooms, very nice sounds and very nice level design. I love it!

I really like the scary moments in your User Story. You did a great job with
the scaring of the player. The level design is so awesome. I know how much
time it takes to create a single room with this level of details. Great job!

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I have read all of the 8 sites of posts here, but i want to give you a complete
list of things i noticed. Please dont mind if i repeat something you already
know. I just want to tell you all things i noticed!

(be carefull: story spoiler! dont read if you didnt play it yet)

Spoiler below!

Save File:
- it looks like the game is not correctly creating the save file
- sometimes it works and sometimes not
- i think it could depend on the place you try to save the game
- i tried to save the game 5 times at different progress
- only 2 out of 5 savegames worked for me

Death / Checkpoints / Respawn:
- like other players already noticed, there are some checkpoints missing
- i died one time when i was outside with the monster
- normally you have to open the stuck door with the crowbar
- but the checkpoint was at the first room again... please fix it!

Monsters:
- i really enjoy the number of the monsters
- dont decrease this please!
- when i walked outside and the monster came out of the cupboard:
=> i ran down the stairs and end up at that "stuck door"
=> thats why i ran under the stairs
=> the monster crashed the door and leaved the room
=> but after that the monster did not leave and was still outside
=> when i was tryin to get outside, the monster came to me
=> if you go upstairs, the monster rotates in one spot next to the stairs
=> the only way to escape is to run as fast as you can ^^
=> that part scared me out so much ... dude :-)

Scary Moments
- you have a great feeling for good moments to scare the player
- i got scared so much, when i went to that little box and the door pushed open
- but in the room with the tunnel you have human body parts in the desk
=> when you open the door of the desk, you need scary sound!
=> player does not get scared much without this sound!

Keys / locked up doors:
- you already know: there are to many keys
- but i also noticed that you use the monsters to open some doors
- thats really great. good idea man!
- i also like the placement of the keys
- in the normal 'Amnesia' Storyline you have to walk out of the window
- maybe you could use that feature to get into a hidden room
- or to get to the next room... its your choice ^^
- just add some new things to get doors opened
- like switches with a countdown / timer function
- (like the books in the library in normal 'Amnesia')

Ideas:
- i love your logic in the storyline... good work with that
- but try to add some new things... think about the normal 'Amnesia'
- there are so many things you could add:
=> machines to fix/repair
=> the explosion liquid
=> doors to open up with a countdown / timer / wheel to lift the door
=> try to use the boxes to reach some point (one box over the other)
=> water
=> maybe other persons to interact / help
=> two or more items to collect and comapare to a tool you can use

So thats a long list, and i hope it helps you.
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I really enjoy your User Story and i hope you will continue working on it.
I know it is much work and much time, but your work is so awesome that
i really want to play more of this. :-)

I will stay tuned for updates. Thank you very much for your great work!


Best Regards
iNs

Edit:
I have created a german language file for your map. :-)
- all item names and descriptions translated
- all events (doors) translated
- the first letter in the 'wake up room' translated
- the names of the rooms translated
- i did NOT translate the second letter
=> because i dont even know where i can find it on your map :p
=> but i can translate that part too, if you tell me where this letter is ^^


If you want to have it, i can give it to you and you can add it to the download.
It is only one file and it is automatically detected by the game.