The Harrowing Tale Of Redendrew Mansion Demo Update Released

[evertuy]

I just finished your demo, and I must say your writing was excellent! Your story writing capabilities are phenomenal. But I did see some grammar errors, only a few.

But your levels were designed OK, but I saw numerous bugs and badly placed walls and such. I say layering messes everywhere. And the monsters, the one walking past the window was very clever, but the others not so much (Not counting the one at the beginning). And the "Gardens" so to speak, the water couldn't be heard walking in it.

Overall, great writing, needs improvement on the level design.