In Memory

[Elexyr]

Nice feel, maybe a bit too nice? By that I mean, not all that scary. However,

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when the door up the winding stair case closed and I heard a skittling sound, kinda like a little girl pumped on experiments, I was like "wtf!". Try and follow through by some more story after that point, as well as maybe adding a monster which is the little girl? Who helps in some way, maybe?

Level design is beautiful, though

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maybe add a bit more items? Or maybe it's intentional, like it was deserted for some years?

All in all, quite good man, just a bit more atmosphere/darkness/scarybooboo stuff and more story.

Oh, and to help with the "there's more story if you went that way, before you went that way" thing, add some sort of obstacle (locked door, destructible debree...) which requires you to go to that area in the first place.

Hope this helps and looking forward to more from you.