Looking for a partner[scripting]

[varto]

Well, as the title says, I'm looking for a partner to help finish my map. I have full knowledge on how to map and how to place entities(pathnodes & whatnot) but there is something odd going on when i script. For some reason only certain scripts will actually work on my lang and hps files. like my first letter in my lang file just doesn't want to work. I have followed the video tutorials to their fullest and still cant get it to work

Example: <CATEGORY Name="Journal">
<Entry Name="Note_lostkey_Name">Halt your progress!</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_lostkey_Text">Notice reguarding conversions,[br]That good for nothing Lesley lost the key to the dump again. Until the key is found[br]once again all progress with conversions will have to be canceled, and postponed.</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_theletter_Name">this is a letter</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_theletter_Text">this is a letter.[br]wall o'text.</Entry>
</CATEGORY>

seeing as that one simple note refuses to work, i was wondering if anyone would like to be my partner and finish the scripting half of my map? I would gladly mark each spot with what i would want to happen in detail.[map has just started its progress]