My Custom Story! Memory Demo...

[Khyrpa]

Spoiler below!

The box game should be more easy, no narrow spot

Easy you say? :u
Took me a long time to complete (the damned boxes are so clumsy...)

But yeah... I got stuck at a later spot, but I checked the maps out in level editor and I don't think I missed anything important. Gonna feedback on this spoiler

Spoiler below!

So yeah this started off as quite interesting, but after the box thing there was just no point in anything. I just ran around, triggered random scares which were all about grunts. It was weird when the comforting guitar music played while grunts hasted at me. I was able to gather everything but 2rods for the machinery, which you clearly just ripped from original The Dark Descent. Don't just copy paste things like that, in your map it was easy to see when your areas begun and frictionals work ends (details... details...), speaking of which.
Your maps lacked everything required for a good atmosphere: lighting, detailing and level design all need some work. The idea of playing 2 characters is kind of interesting though, if you can pull it off well (I didn't know which one I played when running around repairing the machinery).
If you can fix all the gliching areas and polish the levels up, this could be great