My Custom Story! Memory Demo...

[skypeskype]

Ok... so I played your map (not all of it) and MAN IS IT FRICKIN LONG... and its only a demo O.o

Now for the feedback:

Spoiler below!

-I liked it, but as Khyrpa said, you shouldn't just copy/paste the machine room from Amnesia and the same puzzles. You made some other rooms in there but still ...
-I found the secret room in the storage. But then you had to kill mee ... you little devil.
-I love how you used the miniature objects as decorations. That little Alexander on the shelf is just adorable (Im kidding, I threw rocks at him >)
-I won the Box game! It was fun! I'm really glad you threw it in there. Too bad nothing happened D:
- There are some overlaping textures here and there, some holes in the walls, but hey, it's just a demo.
-I don't really get whi the grunts are there. Randomly throwing them in to scare me ( and they did a very good job at the upper storage area) isn't cool.

OVERALL it's a preety good custom story (very long too) with great potential, but I think you should find someone and cooperate togheter in making the full version.

I didn't finish it, since its too long for me to complete it in 1 sit I got the trinity rod and made all the puzzles in the machine room. I guess After I repair the elevator, the demo will end.

Cheers! and wish you luck with this project!