My Custom Story! Memory Demo...

[Tenno]

I enjoyed playing through your story, the concept was interesting and the use of the penumbra creatures was unexpected but a nice touch. Shrinking down larger objects such as the fountain, iron maiden, closet etc. as decorations around the rooms was also very nice. The secret room was good until I read the note
The box mini game was quite annoying, I didn't finish it but it was still cool

However there were some negative aspects in the story for me. The supply of oil was lacking, it could just be me wasting it in fear, I'm not sure
Copying the machine room from the original Amnesia story and adding a few rooms I thought was quite uninspired and dull. Some of the notes had some grammatical errors and the actual storyline didn't make much sense.

Overall, it was very good and I can't wait to see what else you do with it.