Oh my god, this map was absolutely amazing! Me and my friends played it last night, and it blew every other custom story out of the water. Please continue this, it was awesome.
Some parts we were a little confused, like the dungeon maze thing with the grunts, we had no idea where to go, we could not sprint (not sure if that was intended or not), and I don't see any way we could of made it out alive. We also died at the part with the long hallway with the doors on all sides, but I believe that has to do with my friends poor ability at controlling your "avatar".
The angel statue part was CRAZY, I loved it.
It did start out slow, the voice acting was a bit on the quiet side for us. I suggest trying to give the player a little bit more control like other people have been saying.
Anyways, please continue this, it is now my favorite custom story