Breach - A short playable story

[Kurton]

Good map; the construction is just fine, remember that not only is decoration with objects important, but also lighting, you could do wonders to make that "pop" a little more.

I think, (this applies to a few other stories as well, I'm sure) if this map is ever revisited, the diary-text should be less subjective; the "Oh I dread this place" entry in the beginning sort of disagreed with what I felt, and made a disconnection between me and the protagonist. Just a little thing to think about :)