Snowed In (Custom Story DEMO RELEASED)

[Streetboat]

It's not a good idea to force your character's emotions too much on the player, because the player shouldn't have to be told to be scared. If you make the character make a bunch of gulping sounds and text saying 'oh my god I'm so scert', it's just cheesy and stops being scary. The only time when a lot of on-screen text is appropriate is when the character is relaying information that the player might not understand. For example, my current custom story has a lot of messages (not in note form, don't worry!) but they relay information such as what an object is, what it used to mean to the character, etc. Not 'OMG WHAT WAS THAT'.