Kurton
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RE: Unforgiven Memories + Pictures added
I'm not sure the hall in the first pic really needs a fountain... it's right next to the carpet, what if somebody splashes, etc :p Looks cluttered enough in there as it is anyway.
I like the busy warmth of the third pic, it looks nice and "safe," however i'm not sure it needs two portraits of Alexander, heh. Maybe change the second one, or remove it altogether. Also, it doesn't make much sense for the billboards coming through the window to be that small, sharp, and concentrated, I think you should just add some big ones and make them very very faint.
The blue fog in the fourth pic doesn't make much sense to me, can you explain it?
All in all though, I like your attention to basic order and detail, and it seems like something to look forward to. (Sorry, I know I talk too much.)
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07-20-2011, 06:08 PM |
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