[WIP] "The Living End" - Custom Story

[Tenno]

Not a bad custom story, has some potential but sadly, a few flaws as well. The lighting in the dining room was a little off and the shadows it cast across the ceiling didn't look right. The plate smashing followed by a scream was incredibly loud and it scared the hell out of me and almost burst my eardrums, I think I lost about 30% of my hearing

Spoiler below!

The chase scene when the door breaks apart wasn't particularly scary because at first I didn't know what was going on and realized that I was getting chased by something but nothing attacked me, so there was no real sense of danger or urgency

But, there are redeeming factors, some of the scares. Brilliant. The said plate smashing scare was good, just a little loud. The door slamming scare was also great, because it really did catch me off guard, the environment seemed safe at the time, no eerie music, lots of bright lights.

I would like to see what happens next with this map, because overall, it was a good experience

Keep working on it mate