Any ideas with my map?

[Kman]

Well I'm sorry if you think I'm stupid, but I am a newb at the forums.
And thanks for advice.
I can use my custom story with the many night terrors I had when I was young.
When I say night terrors I don't mean nightmares. This is a thing that was wrong with me when I was young and doctors were actually thinking I was going to die from sleep walking.
I barely remember once
A night terror, it was a old mansion dusty and cobwebs my brother locked me in a dark room in the dream.
I tried to scream mom, but couldn't.
Finally a green hand grabbed my arm and I heard a whisper saying, " mom can't hear you" and saw a face in the corner of the dark room then my dream fades from there. Freaking creepy.

Did I just tell a whole story of my dream? Well, at least I got my idea.
Thanks.

that happens to my brother some nights... about every 6 months you just hear him screaming like someones burying him alive and then when he wakes up he doesn't remember a thing. and as for your custom story, i'd say have a chase where you have to solve a simple puzzle at the same time. i find moments like that to be the scariest because it forces you to stay calm and think when you're facing shear terror and you if you take too long figuring it out the monster will get you. that's what mainly made justine so scary for me... btw NEWB FIVE.