[WIP] Ray Of Hope

[GoDl1Kelol]

You can't possibly make the player read like 5 pages of notes and leave in a few typos. I can see this is going in the direction of being a tad too serious and that's really pulling you out of it.I didn't read them anyway so my only concerns are really the mementos and the voice acting. Other than that I must say the levels look mighty fine. A carpet in the corridor after the dream at the beginning was like inside the wall and when you were being dragged my screen was simply spazming all over the place for some reason. Apart from that and the walls I must say you did a pretty nice job with the levels.

P.S. someone tell me what I'm supposed to do with the jar so I go back in there and finish it

EDIT:
Oh and another thing that simply drove me to the extent of facepalming was opening the script file and reading all that "MADAFAKA COOL EPIC SHIET XDXD!!!! DDD" stuff in there.