Looking for Custom Story partners

[Carlyle]

Here's the first pic.
It's of the first scene.
Its going to have a slightly cracked door at the end of the hall with light coming through. Your vision will be hazy, you will be slow and you'll be dazed. Upon nearing the center of the hall you hear something from behind. (I've read from a do's and don'ts post that early monster encounters are don't build suspense) We can still do it but, if it seems to fast then we could add voice there or something.
Tell me what you like and want.