need some help/pointers.

[Death Icarus]

so i made this level, and did some scripting on it.
this is my first attempt, at both making a level, and scripting.

somethings dont work so well, but overall i like what i have so far.
it would be cool if someone can look at my scripting and see what i can do to improve it, making something work better, and some tips.

and im not sure how to attach my level.