Custom Story help.

[Leeeyam]

So, I have been bored and I wanted to create a custom story, I'm pretty good at mapping, and basic at coding, but I'm terrible at the story line, I thought of one where you're playing as a character and you're walking back to your wealthy home, after walking through your village you noticed some weird banging noises following behind you, after reaching your house you head to bed, you wake up and head down stairs and you noticed the house is trashed, you try to leave using the main door but it's locked, then you hear banging so you're trying your hardest to escape and i'll try make a string of events.

does this sound good or is there any suggestions in changing this?