[WIP] Very first custom story: Dark Ways

[bartimeus]

So, I'm actually working on my first custom story, which I started one month ago... I had to stop it during the exams, but I'm trying to finish the work.
I'm actually searching for people which can test the map and which can give me a constructive critic. Just a few lines would be fine.
I have to say that the map isn't finished at all!!! I'm still working on every levels of the map at the same time.

Here's some temporary screenshots:












There's the link of the map:
http://www.mediafire.com/?pf2mb1cirsowj66


If there's any problem or if you have any ideas, don't hesitate to tell me...

PS; If anyone know how to post screenshots on the forum, i would appreciate it, thanks.